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2015年3月21日雅思考试写作小范围预测

分类: IELTS雅思英语 

部分2015年3月21日雅思写作预测内容:

题目:

The diagrams describe the production of canned fruit.

思路分析:

流程图,水果罐头的制作过程。

本题图片较多,看似比较混乱且复杂,而且很容易把文章写得很散。所以建议考生根据图片的排列,将过程大致划分为四个大的步骤,即水果取材(第一行三幅图),水果处理(第二行三幅图),罐头制作(第三行四幅图),罐头上市(第四行四幅图)。这样考生在写作中就可以按照这样的一个步骤划分进行段落或结构的划分,并且在对每一个大步骤进行描述的时候,可以适当寻找一下几个小步骤之间的内部关联。

部分小马写作名师例文:

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At the first stage of this process, ripe fruits are picked from the trees and then transported to the factories to select the qualified fruits and eliminate the others. After that, the selected fruits are sent into the processing step and will experience three consecutive steps: storage, washing and weighting.

After these two preparing steps, the manufacturing process of canned fruits will start. The selected fruits are firstly peeled and then divided into chunks, following by putting into cans and mixing with water, juice and syrup. Afterwards, sealing the can and sending the products of this step to the final stage, before the completed canned fruit are packed and conveyed to the supermarkets, those sealed cans still need to be cooked, sterilisd and cooled.
 

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