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预测范文四 Good neighbours 图画描述了两个邻居个领着一只狗,狗在互相打招呼,而人却很冷漠 
As is vividly depicted in the picture, the two lonely neighbors seem to ignore each other while the two dogs greet each others politely and amiably.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, the social interactions have been diminishing. Recently the phenomenon that lots of people loveto raise the dogs while neglecting the communications between the neighbors or relatives has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of ignoring the human communications should be condemned severely or made illegal. Pet-keeping is becoming an increasingly pervasive because a pet may be a companion for old people, a friend for young couples and a playing toy for children. Believe it or not, pets are such an inseparable part in their daily life that they devote lots of energy, time and money to taking care of the need of their loved animals.There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.  

中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害,并举例论证,预测 危害的趋势 
To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several reasons have been put forward. To begin with, since most people have to live on an on-the-move lifestyle, they are denied to have opportunities to share their feelings with their friends and relatives. Whereas pets are good listeners. 
They are so busily scheduled that they have no time even for a drink with some friends.In addition, While there are so many dishonesties going around, they must stay with a dog, which is likely to be faithful to them. Since a pet is loyal to his master and acts as the instructions of humans, a person has no need to get along with his neighbors who may have different opinions about his or her ideas,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have once dropped wastes into the places of interests do take it seriously. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage left by our ancesters.  

最后一段要强调解决问题,谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识,加强执法; 
From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the pets damaging the the relations between the neighbors. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the social contacts between neighbors. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of communications between people instead of staying with a dog alone. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later 

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