Original: Modern people receive vast news and information of many kinds every day and are so overwhelmed by these factual news that they are not think...
写作词汇Original: To begin with, in our era, all kinds of information and messages are booming everyday.Revised: In our times, we are exposed to a great d...
修改范例One type of law that requires civil disobedience is any law that breaks our basic moral code. Laws that are unjust to one segment of society, that...
第二篇Attitudes Towards Two Types of LawRules: Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views....
原稿（第三段）语言修改The nonmainstream areas can do harm to[1] the society, only when people don't inquire them merely for fun, but for resolution[2] of lif...
修改范例In deed, astrology, fortune-telling and psychic readings can sometimes provide comfort when we are feeling sad, enliven our lives when we are bore...
语言修改以及内容补充下面是2篇issue writing习作的点评，这里不仅提供了关于原稿语言错误的修改，还提供了关于题目内容的补充，帮助大家了解如何使文章的内容更加充实。第一篇你会相信算命术或占星术吗？也许你的回答是当然不会，那都是骗人的。可是如果有观点认为诸如占星术、算命术、灵异现象和超自然现象...
目前，GRE的考生在写issue作文时普遍出现以下几个问题：1．例证匮乏，老生常谈。在阐述思想观点之后，缺乏有力的例证去支持所阐述观点。或者总是引用每个人都耳熟能详的例证，例如目前最流行的例证有两个B和两个E，两个B即Bill Gates和Bill Clinton。两个E即Einstein和Edis...
231当前的报告指出全国的新住宅销量在去年下降了9%，而旧房销量增加了16%。因此我们可以预见将会修缮或改造其房屋的业主比例也会增加。而且，那些买旧房的人在购房后将会有更多的富余金钱用于房屋改造。最后，买旧房的人更可能自己进行改造，而不是雇人来做。这些因素说明我们可以预计我们全国的商店产品需求将会增...
231The following appeared in the annual report of a chain of stores that sell supplies for do-it-yourself home improvements."Current reports indi...