这份简历总的来说描述的很详细，把自己的教育背景，工作经验等等都做了详细的描述，但是也是有一些不足之处，他没有介绍他所参加过的活动，是否担任过领导职位或者所获得的荣誉。但是也确实不需要这些，因为他的工作经验已经表明他的能力。

Adam Wright

Campus Address
425 Grant St.
Bowling Green, OH 43403
419-555-1040
wright15@bgsu.edu

Permanent Address
411 Banks Ave.
Elyria, OH 44035
440-555-9999
adamwright@fastmail.com

Education

B.S. in Accounting, Bowling Green State University     Expected May 2001
3.4 cumulative GPA, 3.6 major GPA

A.A.S. in Accounting, Lorain County Community College     May 1996
3.7 cumulative GPA, 3.9 major GPA, Dean's List all semesters

Relevant Course Work

Financial Accounting
Managerial Accounting
Cost Accounting

Auditing
Federal Taxation
Corporate Finance

Effective Business Writing
Speech Communications
Information Systems

Work Experience

Junior Accountant, Homanick Inc., Akron, Ohio    September 2000-present
Handle monthly journal entries; analyze sales/marketing monthly expenses and sales representatives'　gross receipts; create spreadsheets; handle special projects. 

Accounting Intern, Burry and Associates, Akron, Ohio      May-August 2000
Reviewed and corrected accounting entries, assisted with financial planning input and analysis, and generated reports. Accounting corrections revealed nearly $50,000 in unpaid bills and mislaid funds. 

Billing Coordinator, Corpora Corp., Elyria, Ohio          June 1996-August 1999
Handled collections on more than 500 past due accounts; reconciled payment discrepancies; resolved client billing and eligibility issues. 

Crew Leader, Michael's Muffins, Elyria, Ohio                     June 1994-May 1996
Supervised crew of seven workers and managed bakery's daily operations. 

Computer Skills

MS Excel 　MS Access 　MS Word 　MS Internet Explorer 　MS Powerpoint