Disneyland is the world’s biggest entertainment park, it was created by Walt Disney. Nowadays, many children like to go to Disneyland and have fun for a day. Last year, my family went to Hong Kong and we spent a day in it. It was such a good memory for me.
迪斯尼乐园是世界上最大的娱乐公园,它是由沃尔特迪斯尼创造。如今,许多孩子喜欢去迪斯尼乐园,玩上一天。去年,我的家人去了香港,我们花了一天时间在迪士尼乐园。这对我来说是美好的回忆。 

When I went to Hong Kong, I felt so excited, because I wanted to go to Disneyland for a long time, and this time my dream finally came true. Before I came to the entrance, I saw the big pictures of the Disneyland world and the classic cartoon characters. They were so lovely. When I got to the Disneyland world, there were so many people, the atmosphere was so lively. 
当我去香港的时候,我感到很兴奋,因为我很久之前就想去迪斯尼乐园了,而这一次我的梦想终于实现了。在我来到门口前, 我看到了迪斯尼世界的大图片和经典的卡通人物。他们是如此可爱。当我到达迪士尼乐园的世界里,有那么多人,气氛很热闹。 

I was so impressed by the amusement equipments. As the music was playing, I felt myself was in the wonderland.  I saw the pumpkin car, the wooden horse, the Ferris wheel and so on. I played all the amusement equipments and felt so satisfied. The most excited thing was to see the parade. I saw my favorite Mickey Mouse and other cartoon characters.
我对游乐设备印象非常深刻。由于音乐一直在放, 我觉得自己是在仙境里。我看到了南瓜车,木马,摩天轮等等。我玩遍了所有的游乐设备,感到很满意。最兴奋的事是去看游行。我看到了我最喜欢的米老鼠等卡通人物。 

I had a great day in the Disneyland world. 
在迪士尼乐园的世界里我度过了非常棒的一天。