英语应用文写作之留学申请信(Application for Admittance)
 
 留学和奖学金申请信中须写明下列几点：

(1)写明申请学校和所学专业。

(2)提供申请人的个人资历。

(3)索取申请学校相关的申请表等。

留学申请信

【例一】

Post Office Box 2418

Branch 28-5

Post Code 100081

Beijing, P.R.C.

November 12, 1997

The Registrar of Admission

The Graduate School of

the Pennsylvania State University

U.S.A. 16802

Dear Sir:

I am deeply interested in your graduate school in the Department of MechanicalEngineering, and plan to apply for admission for the fall of 1998. My GPA in the university was 3.5, and I plan to take TOEFL and GRE in October and December, 1997, respectively.

Please send catalog and application forms to me. I shall be greatly appreciated.

Very truly yours,

Wang Yang

【例二】

Department of Applied Physics

Tsinghua University, 100084

Beijing, China

Sept. 11th, 1999

RE: Applying for Admittance

Office of Graduate Admissions

Boston University

Massachusetts, U.S.A.

Dear Sir,

I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.

My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Tsinghua University(China). Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my BS degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field under the instructions of first?class professors and in a dynamic academic atmosphere. I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.

I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, a detailed introduction to the School of Physics, and other relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Li Jin

【例三】

English College

Beijing Foreign Language University

Beijing 100083

P.R. China

June 16, 1999

Office of Admission

Huntington University

Dear Sir,

Thank you for your letter and the application forms. Enclosed you will find the completed forms and three checks (80 dollars) for the application fee and the first month?s rent for dormitory. The additional 5 dollars will be deposited at your college. I shall appreciate any favorable action you might take in admitting me to your college for the spring semester of 1998. I am most anxious to hear from you soon.

Sincerely yours，

Zhao Pengfei

【例四】

Department of Finance and Econmics

Shanghai Jiaotong University

Shanghai 200043

May 1, 1999

Graduate School

Oxford University

London

Dear Sir:

Thank you for your email and kind offer! Definitely, I would like to try to apply for a visa for the winter quarter. I understand that both you and Professor Black have tried very hard to help me with my situation and I appreciate your efforts.

As it is true that nobody really knows why the visa officers refuse certain applicants and allow others, I have been told by several successful visa reapplicants that reapplying with a new I?20 with a slightly different offer from the US schools would help. For example, a slight increase in financial aid and so on. I don"t know whether this is something possible for you to consider for my situation. But I would really appreciate if you could consider some possibilities. I know that I have given you enough trouble and please ignore my request if it is too difficult for you to do. I will simply try my best to get my visa and come to your school.

Thanks!

Sincerely yours,

Liu Liping

【例五】

Department of Electronics

Tianjing University

Tianjing 300005

P.R.China

April 3, 1998

Graduate School

University of Alberta

Edmonton, Alberta

Canada

Dear Sir,

Enclosed is my completed application form. I have also requested all my credenti? als to be forwarded to you. They should reach you shortly. I would like to assure you of my deep intention to attend your Undergraduate School of Business Administration for the spring semester of 1989. I sincerely hope that you will process my application and expedite my papers at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours，

Feng Jiming

【例六】

Communication Department

Fudan University

Shanghai 200056

P.R.China

March 23, 2001

Graduate School

University of Toronto

Toronto, Ontario

Dear Sir,

I have just received from your office an application form and information for international students. However, I have completed and submitted the same form and paid the $25 admission/evaluation fee before.

Would you please tell me if my application and fee have reached you or if the recent materials were sent to me by mistake?

Thanks for your assistance.

Yours sincerely,

Luan Jinfu

【例七】

Department of Computer

Beijing University

Beijing 100087

P.R. China

1st May, 2000

Office of Admission

University of Auckland

Private Bag Auckland

New Zealand

Dear Sir,

I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Beijing University in June next year. I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your university next fall to study applied computer for Ph.D. degree.

I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information, and also a set of application forms for admission. Thank you for your kind assistance.

Sincerely yours，

Wang Feng

【例八】

Department of Applied Mathematics

Wuhan University

Wuhan 430000

P.R. China

March 16, 1999

Office of Foreign Admission

University of Waterloo

Waterloo, Ontario

Canada

Dear Admission Officer:

I am ×××, the Chinese applicant who desires to pursue my Ph.D. study in your honored program.

I am very sorry to inform you that I presently cannot afford the application fee you demand because of the following reasons:

1?The high foreign currency exchange rate, US$1 = 8.9 RMB;

2.My relative low monthly income, about 200 RMB (equal to only $22);

3.The extremely strict limitation in China to obtain foreign currency, esp. U.S. Dollar in near future. According to current foreign currency regulation, only citizens who get visa can have at most $2,000 exchanged.

I got excellent scores on TOEFL (63/62/67, total: 640, May, 1998) and GRE (V: 700, Q: 800, A: 800, total: 2,300, Nov. 5th, 1998). My graduate GPA is 3.7. I sincerely hope you can consider my situation and review my application first.

Thanks a lot. Your kindness is greatly appreciated.

Yours truly，

Fang Lin

【例九】

Department of Chemical Engineering

Tsinghua University

Beijing 100084

China

Jan. 6, 1994

Office of Foreign Admission

University of Birmingham

P.O. Box 363

Birmingham B152TT

U.K.?

Dear Sir:

I wish to pursue a doctoral degree in Chemical Engineering at your institution. My desired date of entrance is fall, 1994. Please send me necessary application forms at your early convenience.

If possible, I also wish to obtain a graduate assistantship so that I may support myself and obtain more practical experience while pursuing graduate study.

I obtained my B. E. (Chemical Engineering) in 1989 and M. S. (Chemical Engineering) in 1992 from Tsinghua University. At present, I work as a teacher at the same university.

I have taken the TOEFL and received a score of 607. I am going to take GRE this coming October.

Would you please send me the application forms for admission and financial support? Thank you very much.

Sincerely yours,

Henry Yu